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    Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Dorian Featherfall on Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:52 am

    Name: Dorian Featherfall
    Nickname: White Shadow / The Wind
    Race: Human
    Age: 28

    Hair Style: Short and Spiky
    Hair Color: Silver
    Eye Color: Blue
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    Personality: Dorian is a cold and distant man. He keeps his distance when people are around, and tries to stay by himself when he can.
    Strengths: Quick on his feet, Analytical
    Weaknesses: Works best alone, so he has a hard time relying on people
    Hobbies: Meditating, enjoying nature
    Quirks: Almost always tries to stay out of sight.

    Starting Level(0-3): 3
    Powers: Invisibility to what he can touch with his skin, and Wind manipulation.

    History: Dorian was accidentally abandoned when he was too young to remember his parents. His invisibility powers accidentally triggered on their own when his mother looked away for one second when she had him in the park for a walk. She panicked and started searching everywhere but the stroller he was still sitting in. In her desperate search, a random thug walked up and stole the stroller that he was sitting in, noticing her purse and other valuables hidden away in it.

    The thug eventually realized that Dorian was still in the stroller when his powers deactivated. He was going to abandon baby Dorian, but realized that he could use him for bigger plans. When they both realized that Dorian could become invisible, they trained him to be an even better criminal, utilizing his power to the fullest. Over the years, the thug became more of a con artist, using young Dorian as his centerpiece in his plans.

    When Dorian was older, the thug started to introduce him to robbery and theft, but when on one job that involved stealing antiques from an old Japanese man, Dorian's life took a big turn around. The man has caught Dorian in the middle of his theft, and when the young boy turned on the old man, Dorian proved to be little challenge. The old man effortlessly brushed the boy aside, Dorian was young and small, but he could normally take on most adults, and surely an old man shouldn't be a challenge.

    No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't lay a finger on the man. When Dorian was finally tuckered out, the man spoke for the first time. He talked Dorian down, asking him why he was doing this, and about his family. Moved by the young boy's tale, he decided to take him as an apprentice, but first, he had to change him as a human being.

    He began to talk to Dorian about his actions, and how they effect the people he hurts, about the tale of his mother, and how the very actions he takes now, were responsible for his mother's sorrow and eventual depression. He had heard years ago, about a silver haired woman who had lost their child, and then the stroller afterwards, he then recently heard about her suicide from the depression caused by the loss of her son. He saw her face in the paper, and the boy was her spitting image.

    Dorian resolved to change, and this was when the old man told him about his past. He was a ninja back in Japan, but when he had enough of killing, he moved to Alacritas City. The antiques he was stealing where actually relics from his old ninja clan that he brought with him.

    Over the years that they trained together, the old man instilled a sense of justice in him, and his second power showed itself, and they began to develop it as well. Unfortunately, the ninja was quite an old man, and eventually died of natural causes, this happened when Dorain was 16. Alone, and only knowing how to fight, steal, and kill, Dorian was lost on what to do, but eventually got into the assassination business, but he would only ever kill other criminals.
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    Re: Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Avytrius on Tue Aug 20, 2013 1:55 pm

    Approved under the understanding that if someone actively checks for your presence, and their Focus is greater than your Endurance, they can see you.



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    Re: Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Dorian Featherfall on Fri Aug 23, 2013 8:45 am

    Can I add in Chi manipulation to my powers? This would be more like Qigong, where I use my Chi to strengthen my body, and can send it into people by touch.
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    Re: Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Bloo on Fri Aug 23, 2013 9:09 pm

    If you want to replace wind manipulation, sure. It's gotta be one or the other though.


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    Re: Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Dorian Featherfall on Sat Aug 24, 2013 12:02 pm

    sounds good to me.
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    Re: Dorian Featherfall

    Post by Avytrius on Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:16 am

    Due to recent discussion amongst the administration team, a slight adjustment needs to be made to your invisibility power. Instead of requiring a Focus simply greater than your Endurance, players now only require a minimum of Focus equal to your Endurance.

    I.E. if a player actively checks for your invisibility, and your Endurance and their Focus are equal, they can see you.

    They still need to actively check for your presence, and no one should just randomly decide to check for invisible people unless they're suspicious, so you should still get the element of surprise, mostly.


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